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Bid On My Love

I whisper, I adore you, do you not love me beloved, I'll never need anyone else, oh I am feeling so unloved. My heart has been fluttering since our last kiss, I am falling into your eyes, oh lets again find the bliss. _______________________ November 28, 2015 Couplet Written by Broken Wings For the contest, Bid On My Love, sponsor, Tammy Reams Fourth Place

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Skat A

Date: 12/16/2015 12:43:00 AM

Broken, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**

Constance La France
Date: 12/16/2015 1:19:00 AM

Thank you Skat

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/14/2015 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations! Well done.

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 4:03:00 AM

Susan, thanks for the congratulations !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2015 6:26:00 PM

very pretty one, Constance. Congrats on a great win.

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 4:04:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the pretty and the congrats ~

Lu Loo

Date: 12/14/2015 6:15:00 PM

Congrats Broken Wings...

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 4:05:00 AM

Laura, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2015 3:39:00 PM

Dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 4:07:00 AM

Jan, thank for the congrats ~

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/14/2015 10:10:00 AM

Congrats Constance! Emotional lyrics!

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:41:00 AM

Balveen, thanks so much for the congrats ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/14/2015 10:01:00 AM

BW, congrats on your placement in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:41:00 AM

Alexis, thank you for the congrats, appreciate ~

Lin Lane

Date: 12/14/2015 9:50:00 AM

Well done, BW, and congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:42:00 AM

Lin, thank you so much for the congratulations ~

James Inman

Date: 12/14/2015 8:53:00 AM

Loved it the first time I read it, even more now.

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:43:00 AM

James, that is so nice, thank you ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/14/2015 8:40:00 AM

Lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:43:00 AM

Sandra, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations ~

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2015 7:42:00 AM

Great bribe, Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:45:00 AM

Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations ~

Funom Makama

Date: 12/5/2015 9:11:00 AM

What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share

Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2015 10:45:00 AM

Funom, thanks for that nice comment and the 7!!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/29/2015 4:39:00 AM

Constance, your piece is loveliness and lightness, in both form and verse! ...:), jill

Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Jill for the visit and the nice comment

James Inman

Date: 11/28/2015 8:54:00 PM

Sweet write BW.

Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 1:54:00 AM

Thank you James for the sweet

Tim Smith

Date: 11/28/2015 8:36:00 PM

Very lovely Constance

Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 1:54:00 AM

Thank you Tim for the lovely

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2015 5:07:00 PM

lovely couplets Broken Wings good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/29/2015 1:55:00 AM

Thank you Jan for the lovely and the good luck