Bi-Polar Lovers

Men meet And greet. Friends wait Then, date Tough boys Share toys. Cute Girls Wear pearls They walk And talk. Love bursts At first The hitch -- Mood switch He tries She sighs Words heat Not Sweet Trifles Stifle Hearts scream No gleam. Dreams die Good bye. Bad blend The end 12/29/2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2016 12:59:00 PM

- Never lose your dreams, great written Dane Ann - Thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship:) - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/29/2016 3:12:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by to read my poetry. New Year with neew poems and friendships sound great to me. Happy 2017

Chris Green

Date: 12/29/2016 11:17:00 AM

This was cute Dane Ann, I liked the...Hi, how are you - beat it, leave me alone, aspect to this. Sounds like a few of my relationships. : )

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/29/2016 11:23:00 AM

LOL Unfortunately, it isn't as easy as this poem makes it sound! lol I'm so glad you enjoyed this fun little write. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2016 10:34:00 AM

great string of fab footles I do love this form Dane Ann:-) hugs jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/29/2016 11:04:00 AM

It is a fun form. I did have one couplet that reversed the rhythm pattern. I thought it appropriate for the reverse in mood swings that can really effect relationships that bi-polar people live with. I still called the poem a footle. What do you think?