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Beyond Your Conscience

As this pen merges with the tips of my fingers You anticipate the depths of my speech Urging, their shallow minds lingered, To speak of such, beyond the reach Rather to see air, than the beauty Of a gale cast upon the summer Who would be willing to subdue What others could not utter Are you I ? To carry its value? The words written in a state Where only I contain power You are of you. As I am of I. So it remains, the doubt of the mind... -J.W

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/30/2014 12:31:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem Justin. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
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Date: 5/30/2014 10:20:00 AM
Hi Justin, What a lovely poem! I'm glad I found this beauty that is full of depth and emotion~ Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Congrats on this poem being featured. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:13:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/20/2014 6:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Justin. Very thought provoking first poem.. Hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/20/2014 11:02:00 AM
WOW, Justin,, love the thought provoking ending... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/20/2014 7:46:00 AM
Hi Justin, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2014 4:38:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Justin :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 11:30:00 PM
Nice poem
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