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Beyond the Tropical Paradise

Beyond the tropical paradise Written By Dean Masciarelli Tuesday, June 29, 2010 Beyond the tropical paradise And deep underneath the ocean waves at the very bottom of the sea There lies old ships and treasures from the ship wrecks of the past Where haunting figures remains are forever frozen in a time lapse From people who had lost there lives and were laid to rest in there final resting place And it was not by there own choice Yet as time progressed there remains were covered by the plankton of the sea And it leaves one to question all of there belongings that were left behind underneath the new and existing coral reefs Should all there treasures that are found be left untouched or should they all be put into a museum for all to cherish

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Date: 6/29/2010 4:29:00 AM
Your poem poses an interesting question, well written
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Date: 6/29/2010 3:54:00 AM
Perfect write sarah x enjoyed :-)
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