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Beyond the Realm of Wishes

In sun-scorched dunes, beside a weathered sentinel, a glint ensnared his weary gaze. A tarnished lamp / grazed / its secrets unknown / a genie unbound, a muted haze. Three worldly desires danced like tempting fruit, ambition's flame, …a reckless spree. Yet visions sprouted, with roots of rue, for each sweet, endless dream, …a bitter truth. Perhaps, a gilded crown, a monarch's sway, demands the command on a tyrant's hand. The weight of power, crushing clay, lone haunted nights, he just couldn't bear or stand. Yes, true love's tender clasp, forever held, turned into frost on a rose's stem. Its fragrance quelled, love's embers dimmed, slowly became contemn. Maybe, gold's gleaming touch, Midas' treasure, bought spaciousness, a hollow cave. His grip would taint, his heart would scream, wealth’s warmth replaced by an icy grave. Each coveting song, a trap, a snare, a fleeting wail, a siren's flight. The genie scoffed, with a knowing glare, and said, "Speak then, your folly to invite!" Possibly, Hunger’s serpent coiled within, fate's fickle hand, a plague’s wrath. "May tables be bountiful, may health decree, and banish scourge long shadows.” Yet can such profuse, freely shed, ignite not greed, nor vengeful ire? Will hearts be filled, or souls be bled, where horn-of-plenty, stokes a raging fire?" With eyes unclouded, heart unswayed, he sought a passion, both strong and bold. "For Peace,” He cried, “its branches bade, to heal the wounds, stories untold.” “But Peace," he sighed, "a fragile seed, on battlefields where shadows weep Will men lay down their arms in gloom, or in its wake, forever creep?" Days turned into darkness, stars took their flight. The young man pondered, unbathed day and night. The weight of his cravings, heavy as stone. In the silence of his thoughts, he was not alone. The Genie watched, a frown on his spectral face. His patience sorely waned, his presence filled the cave. "Choose, young man! Your wishes await. The sands of time flow, So, Do…Not… Tempt… Fate." But in the rush, beneath the sun, an unveiled mystery began to soar. The world unravels, its tale begun, beyond a wish, beyond a chore. He saw the dance of light and shade, the emotions of joy and pain. And in that vision, his spirit prayed, a different wish began to reign. With a gentle voice, and knowing glance, he spoke, a truth beyond desire… "I seek not crown, nor love's soft trance, nor fortune's blaze, nor fleeting fire. But wisdom's well, its depths unseen, to pierce the veil, the soul's true light. The path within, my story an untold tale, a life well lived, purposeful insight." Yes, at last, clarity dawned, bright as the noonday sun. One wish he had… …send... the Genie away… and thy will be done. "Exist no more," he said, his voice so clear. And with that, the Genie evaporated…disappeared. The lamp grew cold, a faded gleam, The genie's form, a wisp of breath. For wisdom's path, a truth untold, The greatest wish, a choice extolled. No genie's power, bought or sold, can mend the heart, its path to take. No wish fulfilled, no mighty mite, could hold a candle to a true inner light. He turned… Leaving sun-scorched sand… A map of choices held within in his hand.

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Date: 3/7/2024 3:40:00 AM
If such a genie appears before me with a magic lamp, what all wishes I will seek.... I wonder. The moment of choice is a puzzling moment, when one's mind oscillates between health and wealth, power and position and what not. But a man of inner light will never waver. He will emphatically say- "I seek not crown, nor love's soft trance, nor fortune's blaze, nor fleeting fire. But wisdom's well, its depths unseen, to pierce the veil, the soul's true light. The path within, my story an untold tale, a life well lived, purposeful insight." I know how much grace is needed to make such a choice against the glitter of gold and the allure of power and position. You have asserted that inner illumination can dim all other considerations. Enjoyed this profound poem that has originated from a profound heart. Stay blessed dear David!
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Date: 3/7/2024 5:59:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your thoughtful and profound reflection on my poem touched me deeply. Your understanding of the inner conflict between material desires and spiritual enlightenment touches me. I'm grateful for your acknowledgment of the power of inner illumination and the importance of choosing a path aligned with purpose and insight. Your kind words are a blessing, and I'm thankful for your appreciation of my poem. May you continue to be guided by inner light and wisdom. Wishing you abundant blessings and peace. With heartfelt gratitude, Daniel
Date: 2/6/2024 5:33:00 PM
If you would like to laugh, check out a limerick I wrote on 10/10/2015 that also involves 3 wishes being granted. It goes in a different direction when confronted with wish power. You are under no obligation!
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Date: 2/6/2024 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Duke and I am going to go read it now.
Date: 2/6/2024 5:07:00 PM
Daniel, this is fun. I or others can put ourselves in the place of the man with the opportunity to make three wishes. My own saying is, "There are no shortcuts." If I wanted to accomplish something or change it (including my own mental attitude), it has always taken a lot of work and involved helping others see the value that I believed was there. It could take a lot of persistence and sometimes just meant being able to take advantage of an opportunity that presented itself by chance.
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Date: 2/6/2024 6:07:00 PM
Duke, your personal saying, "There are no shortcuts," beautifully encapsulates the essence of perseverance and the value of hard work in achieving our goals and influencing change. I agree with your reflection on seizing opportunities and persisting through challenges. Indeed, navigating life often requires dedication, persistence, and the ability to recognize and seize the opportunities that come our way, sometimes unexpectedly. Thank you for sharing your insightful perspective and adding depth to the conversation. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/5/2024 7:51:00 PM
Daniel.. your lines shine with brilliance I liked..”seeking wisdom’s well”………most! Since there are four leveks of knowledge, man will always think he knows all the answers. Man will go to extreme lengths to prove it! In life……we discover that knowledge is the booby prize of life! Your poem also has drama,which I like. Thank you! Pangie xx
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Date: 2/6/2024 8:13:00 AM
Dearest Pangie, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts on my poem. Your kind words truly mean a lot to me, and I'm glad you found many elements of wisdom in the lines. Your insight into the levels of knowledge and the realization that it's often in life's experiences that we uncover the true value beyond mere knowledge is very insightful. It's a perspective that adds layers to the themes I sought to explore in the poem. Readers like you inspire me to continue exploring and expressing through poetry. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 2/5/2024 3:47:00 PM
This poem, dear Daniel, is truly magnificent and exudes a remarkable beauty. It delves into profound depths, surpassing mere aspirations, highlighting that no wish granted or insignificant accomplishment can compare to the brilliance of one's inner illumination. It portrays a profound understanding of the myriad choices one possesses, emphasizing their inherent potency.
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Date: 2/5/2024 4:44:00 PM
Dear Sotto, Thank you deeply for your incredibly generous and insightful comment on my poem. Your words have such depth and understanding, capturing the essence of the message I sought to convey. I'm truly touched by your appreciation of the poem's exploration of inner illumination and the significance of individual choices. Your keen perception adds layers of meaning to the verses, enriching the overall experience. Your thoughtful reflection reaffirms the power of poetry to foster connection and understanding. Thank you, my friend, - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/5/2024 2:42:00 PM
This story telling gift of yours is most impressive. I'm so glad he chose well. Enjoyed..
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Date: 2/5/2024 4:39:00 PM
Dear, Nancy, you are so sweet and yes his true inner light helped him to overcome his conflicting thoughts. Iam enjoying your poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/5/2024 2:40:00 PM
Moral of the story: choose free will and make your own way in life. I don't believe in fate or predestination, nor in genies or fairies. Awesome poetry and quite epic in scope, Daniel
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Date: 2/5/2024 4:38:00 PM
Hello Tom, it is always a pleasure to read your comments. I thank you for your kind words. I am with you for I do not believe in fairytales but the concepts can make great fodder for writing poems. - Daniel
Date: 2/3/2024 12:50:00 PM
Very nice work penned in this one. If only we could have a magic Genie to grant us a wish, but only would it be fulfilled if it was a wish that was right for us. Thanks for dropping by my page and leaving such a nice review of my work. Sara K
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Date: 2/4/2024 4:18:00 AM
Good Morning, Sara, thank you my friend and was delighted that you visited. Many people are wishing for more and yet happiness lays right next to them. Have a blessed day. - Daniel
Date: 2/3/2024 12:03:00 PM
This is simply an exquisite lovely cantor’s chant of wisdom’s finite light awesomeness I adored reading your magnificent work Daniel enjoy your weekend.
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Date: 2/3/2024 12:12:00 PM
Dear, Yolanda, what sweet kind words and it filled my heart today. I appreciate your visit and I look forward to reading more of you poems. Have a blessed weekend! - Daniel
Date: 2/3/2024 5:44:00 AM
You reach much depth with this poem--beyond the realm of wishes--No wish fulfilled, no mighty mite, could hold a candle to a true inner light--A map of choices held within in his hand--powerful!
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Date: 2/3/2024 10:06:00 AM
Hello Vijay, thank you so much for most kind words and insights. It is very affirming. - Blessings, Danie
Date: 2/3/2024 2:58:00 AM
Dear daniel, first of all! These are words of wisdom that comes from deep understanding and pondering of all that which revolves and floats in life, and i must say i was awestruck by the way you delivered this. I just watched this series “ alexander” on netflix and for some reason the cleverness and depth of your words made me think of that. Just impeccable. Sometimes when the end is here no fortune can stop or change the stars and whats ahead. No genie too can help, i really love the opening wh
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Date: 2/3/2024 10:04:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Your kind and gracious appreciation for my poem fills me with gratitude. Your comparison to "Alexander" and your recognition of the depth in my words truly humbles me. Your interpretation of the verses about worldly desires and shifting perspectives inspires me deeply.
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Date: 2/3/2024 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for acknowledging the essence of my writing. Your support means the world to me, and I'm honored to have created a new favorite for you. Blessings and heartfelt thanks. - Daniel
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Date: 2/3/2024 3:00:00 AM
Where you stated worldly desires in the most creative and captivating manner “ Three worldly desires danced like tempting fruit, ambition's flame, …a reckless spree.“ soul hitting really! And “ He saw the dance of light and shade, the emotions of joy and pain. And in that vision, his spirit prayed, a different wish began to reign.“ how perspectives change when clarity descends and unravels truth untold and unseen, is so moving and meaningful truly! I love that! This definitely is a new fave for me
Date: 2/2/2024 10:05:00 PM
Bravo, Daniel! Anexcellent Narrative poem. Very engaging and filled with mystery and intrigue. It has a nice rhythm as I read, and the closing wisdom is seed for thought. A FAV for your effort, my friend. POTD or POTW or both IMHO. Thank you for sharing your gift of poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/3/2024 4:16:00 AM
Dear Bill, Your words truly uplift my spirit this morning! I'm delighted that you found the narrative engaging and enjoyed the rhythmic flow of the poem. Your encouragement means the world to me, and I'm grateful for your support. Your kind remarks inspire me to continue sharing my poetry with passion. Sending warm regards from afar! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 7:29:00 PM
“Three worldly desires danced like tempting fruit, ambition's flame, …a reckless spree.” …Great wordsmithing! Draws us in! … “His grip would taint, his heart would scream, wealth’s warmth replaced by an icy grave.” …now you add the genie, wasn’t expecting. Now you add conversation: “ Will hearts be filled, or souls be bled, where horn-of-plenty, stokes a raging fire?"” Very interesting, Daniel!
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Date: 2/3/2024 4:14:00 AM
Dear Kim, Thank you for your insightful feedback! I'm thrilled that you found the progression of the poem engaging, especially with the unexpected twists. Your thoughtful analysis encourages me to delve deeper into the layers of storytelling. Thanks again my dear friend. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 6:38:00 PM
Daniel, your masterpiece poem captivated me to the end! As I read, I wondered what could possibly be his wish. However, at the delightfully satisfying ending, he outsmarted the genie with a very wise wish. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 2/2/2024 6:53:00 PM
Dear Evelyn, thank you for your kind and affirming words and the greatest compliment to get is that it was entertaining. Thank you my dear friend! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 6:04:00 PM
Dear Daniel, magnificence spills eloquently from your golden pen upon the poetic page. Your title is fulfilled as your soul-searching verses bring one to the thought-provoking finale "He turned…/Leaving sun-scorched sand…/ A map of choices held within in his hand." Through our choices, not the broad brush strokes of mere wishes, we create our destiny, our own mistakes, our path lit by our "true inner light" if we choose to follow it. The depth and breadth of your poem is deep, rich and your verse is profound. The length of your of poem did not deter me from reading it several times and lingering in its exquisite multi-layers of ideas, thoughts, choices, artistry and symbolisms. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/2/2024 6:18:00 PM
Dear Susan, Your words are a gentle breeze, carrying the essence of appreciation and reflection, thank you my dear friend. Indeed, our choices sculpt our destiny, guided by our inner light. Your thoughtful insights add layers to the poem's depth. Thank you for immersing yourself in its richness and sharing your warm wishes. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 2:54:00 PM
Truly enjoyable. I liked the fantasy that makes the point. Our hardest job in life is making our own decisions. You write great works.
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Date: 2/2/2024 4:50:00 PM
Dear Hilda, I am so happy you took the time to read and posted your kind comments. Whenever I write long poems I wonder if anyone will read it. Have a blessed weekend! - Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 2:52:00 PM
I felt like I was going on a journey, complete with a Genie. Seems like its the journey to which Joseph Campbell addresses in THE HERO'S JOURNEY (which is really a spiritual journey). Your poem was deep with so much wisdom and insight. Enjoyed it...have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 2/2/2024 4:48:00 PM
Dear Sara, It is always a pleasure to see your kind comments and insights. I will have to look up The Hero Journey and it sound like something I would enjoy. Have a great weekend my dear friend. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 2/2/2024 10:42:00 AM
Love how your poem delves into the complexities of desire and the allure of worldly temptations. It paints a vivid picture of a weary traveller, ensnared by the glint of a tarnished lamp, symbolizing the lure of desires and the pursuit of fulfilment.. It concludes with a sense of closure and resolution as the protagonist chooses to send the Genie away and embrace the path of inner wisdom.
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Date: 2/2/2024 11:49:00 AM
Dear Silent One, I have always appreciated your insightful comments. We, as a society, many times wish for something that is more than what we currently have. The reality is that we are much happier by having choices, making mistakes, learning, growing, and finding fulfillment in the purpose of our lives. Thank you again for the wisdom that you bring. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/2/2024 10:43:00 AM
He leaves behind the sun-scorched sands, holding a map of choices within his hand, symbolizing his newfound clarity and direction in life.. Your poem navigates themes of desire, choice, and self-discovery with depth and poignancy, inviting readers to reflect on the nature of fulfilment and the power of inner wisdom in navigating life's journey.
Date: 2/2/2024 9:54:00 AM
Perfect timing, I just watched the movie “3000 Years of Yearning” humans are typically not successful when it comes to their interactions with Gyn. One is wise to take their petitions to Allah. He will only grant what is pure and in alignment with His will. I very much enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 2/2/2024 11:45:00 AM
Hello Richard, Thank you for reading the poem, and I am happy you enjoyed it. I will have to watch that movie that you shared. Again, Thank you for your comments. - Blessings, Daniel

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