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Beyond the Pale

A guard overseeing the king’s jail Mocked the inmates without fail. He spoke to them rudely And treated them crudely. Now the king has his head in a pail.

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Kim Shaw

Date: 3/14/2015 1:27:00 PM

Great limerick, Paul. Very classic and funny. Love it. Hugs, Kimberly

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/14/2015 3:42:00 PM

Thank you, Kimberly. I sincerely appreciate your kind words of encouragement.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 6:50:00 PM

oh dear! lol Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/14/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for commenting, Jan. I need to spend more time on quality and less time on quantity.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/13/2015 6:27:00 PM

What a very wise and kind King you have. I love limericks, thanks for sharing yours. =)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/14/2015 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Janet for your kind and thoughtful reply. Please know of my appreciation.