Beyond the Pale

Outside the circle- anticolours, black,yellow-ochre and paynes grey

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Lena Townsend

Date: 3/15/2009 6:34:00 PM

Beautiful! God makes all colours to be appreciated, you have honored that here! Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2009 5:17:00 PM

I think people who are color blind live in this kind of world..you make it sound lovely. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/15/2009 4:41:00 PM

Beautiful Cinqku, Brian! I never thought about the "anticolours" before. Thank you for sharing this view and for your thoughtful comment! I would also like to thank you for the opportunity to participate in your contest! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/15/2009 12:35:00 PM

Awesome observation in this excellent artistic poem. I most certainly with Kristin's comment also. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2009 8:26:00 AM

Often, there can be more beauty, when looking outside the circle. Nice one, Brian.

Brian Anderson

Date: 3/15/2009 4:14:00 AM

i just read a painting... amazing

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/15/2009 2:30:00 AM

I love those muted beauties, awesome Brian, not many even see those tones, love, Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/15/2009 2:02:00 AM

Procol Harum , had a " whiter shade of " , back around 1970 , but not as colourful as your Cinqku ... Tks for your kind comments ..