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Beyond the Land of Counterpane

Gentle sounds of rainy days, Cool dampness on a counterpane The memory of my childhood years, beneath a quilt of poetry Stirs longing for that healing grace, that comes again upon the page... A mother's touch with vapor-rub Some toasted bread, a tender face A playground out beyond the dew.. The dampened swing, my misty view.. A shadow was my childhood friend, and sick-bed days a game Imagination flew so high, my carpet ride to magic lands My tattered book of childhood poems, still takes me by the hand
................................................. My first introduction to poetry...Robert Louis Stevenson's Childhood Garden of Verses (A sick-bed keepsake that kept me company)

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Date: 11/7/2011 9:48:00 AM
I have always loved his poetry and this one rivals his. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on a fantastic win in Brian's contest with this momentous piece luv..
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Date: 1/14/2010 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations, on your success in Brian Strand’s “A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR” contest with your poem expressing the love of Robert Louis Stevenson you learned and dreamed as a child. It's easy to see why you are in the winner’s circle. Your poetic skills excel. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:57:00 PM
Ditto what I said in the other contest (you know) Congrulations, CArrie. You genius you.
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Date: 1/10/2010 10:23:00 PM
Carrie, I loved this the first time I read it and knew it was a winner. Congratulations! Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 4:49:00 PM
congratulations ,Carrie. Great job. All this honor must be getting heavy! :)-Robert
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:53:00 PM
Oh I like this. I memorized that poem as a youngster and I think I can recite most of it. Thanks for the memory and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:57:00 AM
Oh, I could definitely relate to this, Carrie! I loved his Garden of Verses--I was so mesmerized with his poems as a child, I believe that together with Enid Blyton he is also responsible for inspiring me to write poetry as a child--he actually gave me shivers when I read this collection! Super congrats on your win with this one--loved it!
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Date: 1/2/2010 4:08:00 PM
Congrats Carrie. Amazing write. Vince
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Date: 1/2/2010 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Carrie. I knew it was the first time I read it. Absolutely beautiful.! Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/1/2010 2:38:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Carrie Rgds Brian.My latest contest Flow ,River,Flow is now open
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:25:00 PM
Abolutely beautiful! Breath-taking actually! A winner for sure. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/30/2009 11:45:00 AM
wow, carrie, this is one of the best I've seen. And I love your choice of writers! Greatest of luck in the contest. Luv, andrea
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Date: 12/30/2009 9:58:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Carrie. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:55:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:42:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:49:00 PM
One of my first too! My Mom had them memorized and used to recite them to me. Light & Love
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:49:00 PM
Nicely done write that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:44:00 PM
Carrie, This is a beautiful narrative. So heartfelt and deeply moving. Love your sentiments so precious. The ending magical.I will have to look Robert Steven's up! This will make a wonderful entry in Brian's contest. Wishing you the best of luck hun. Thanks to for your beautiful sentiments on my latest poem. Bless your heart. Love Light Patty
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