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Beyond Sunset

I won't go out in this day's mess Until my hair in golden tress Is braided neatly, oh, so sweetly. Come to me at break of dawn, Or when the day is nearly drawn In my seclusion of delusion. Please make believe with me And sail away on endless sea, Beyond sunset and beyond regret.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/13/2024 10:52:00 PM

It sounds like a fairytale sail on the sea. It is a 'just do it' moment.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/13/2024 4:35:00 PM

what a delightful, almost mystical read. I liked 'make believe with me and sail away on an endless sea (the endless delusional sea). Well done. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Chetta Achara
Date: 4/13/2024 5:23:00 PM

Thank you.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/13/2024 2:19:00 PM

So beautiful, as i read this i thought of norah jones, not sure if you know her but, the flow of your rhymes and the soothing manner youv delivered this is so very calming and lyrical like a song ill listen to on repeat! Pleasure reading this!

Chetta Achara
Date: 4/13/2024 5:14:00 PM

Thank you. I know of Norah Jones, and I know I like some of her songs when I hear them, but I am terrible when it comes to matching songs to their singer. You comment is high praise indeed. I am humbled.