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Adrift her world no obstacles no dreams to moor, immobilized and still she sailed through stardust particles then glode into the nil Into the fire of night she tousled through, by daylight saving time a strew a scattering of stars appeared leading her inside a flower garden made for two; The scent of Angel trumpets, gardenias, evening primrose blended with a fragrant voice, she simply had no choice as she pressed her little hand against the lunar soil's embroil, foam flowers, chocolate daisies, and Liliums appeared; A shift, then suddenly beyond the reach of earth a blessed gift of lift she flew inside that dwelling place where benevolent souls ignite; Fawning love plush against the evening breeze even stars of night choose their light protease when a small child enters an evening Kingdom, like a Grandiflorus cactus, falling backwards into time... Example for my contest December 20, 2022

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Date: 12/21/2022 2:07:00 PM
stunning images, and depth of meaning - that's what your poems are, Dear Poet. To my Faves. Merry Christmas ~ Mala
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Mala, glad you feel the heart connection as I do
Date: 12/21/2022 6:24:00 AM
Creative work penned. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara
Date: 12/20/2022 9:01:00 PM
Mystic Sister, your divinely inspired (yes, that’s what I said) poem makes flowers of moon dust, sends constellations to flame from a candle’s wick… oh, oh. that we could share a single consciousness for even half an hour,,, I’d benefit the most, most likely…but my soul has its past mystical exchanges w/Yahweh to share… I think you win the contest! Merry Christmas! Holy Christmas! A fave ,Love you, sally
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2022 4:13:00 AM
No contest here, we are all together sharing ideas, I am always so eager to read all the poems for the contest, each one has a luminous glow of the person who wrote it, Sally. I hope you join the contest, its not about winning its about how well we journey with ourselves and others, Love you xo
Date: 12/20/2022 8:01:00 AM
"when a small child enters an evening Kingdom, like a Grandiflorus cactus, falling backwards into time..."~ Absolutely love this! The mystery of love...till then, one has not begun to live. And, indeed, one must enter as if a child -- for love is youth blossoming eternal. Beautiful writing.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/20/2022 8:48:00 PM
Joe, I agree! Sister Mystic, oh how I agree with dear Joe!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2022 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating the poem Joe.
Date: 12/20/2022 5:48:00 AM
Wow. I wrote mine before I saw this powerful example! I need to rewrite! Lovely.
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Date: 12/20/2022 9:17:00 AM
I am sure yours is equally good Karen, thank you for joining my contest gl with it :)
Date: 12/20/2022 5:29:00 AM
And a very beautiful and moving example it is Miss Rose….your photos are always so apt for your words! Debx
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Date: 12/20/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Deb you are most kind, gl in the contest if you choose to join :)

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