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On a barren maple tree a black bird is cawing, Silhouetted against the white linen bleak sky; All is silent, still, hushed as if waiting. Purplish glossy feathers, why do you not fly? Are you listening to the far off thunder with a shy? Then the first raindrops are gently falling, You spread your beautiful black wings wide; And in a moment you have gone soaring. A lightning flash - did you fly away to hide? Fearing the mighty thunder boom, away you glide! On the bending branch rain is crashing, And wind is howling in the tangled branches; Are you safe black bird from the thundering? Oh - I see you there in the house rafters! And in the fading rain you fly with dipping passes! _______________________ August 3, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/Beyond My Window Copyright Protected, ID 15-697-011-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 8/7/2015 11:03:00 AM
Loved this, Constance! Wonderful imagery. This is a subject close to my heart!
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Date: 8/4/2015 7:05:00 PM
I love bird poems, almost as much as cat poems. This is a beauty, Constance. Good luck in her contest!
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:47:00 AM
I like your keen and gentle observation of the bird and all his challenges. The lightning, thunder, raindrops, and wind. I like the contrast of the observer tucked into a dry and safe place, against the bird who must find his own shelter. GBU. Curtis.
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:13:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous composition! Very lovely descriptions and your word choice really brought the piece to live in a vivid and colorful way. The curious concern of the narrator for the small bird's safety is touching. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:51:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance. You truly have a gift, dear...I could see it in my mind's eye. Hugs...
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