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Through these lips sorrows pass bound to slip seldom last. Behind smiles secrets said all the while kept in red. Whisper cries from the heart tender ties love may start. Lipstick likes to make marks takes all types to send sparks. Touch these lips don't dare miss passing ships with a kiss. 50 words rhyme 3/10/23 Colored pencil illustration G. Gaul (Hyperrealistic)

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Date: 3/5/2024 11:16:00 PM
Superb Greg. Poem and illustration. Cheers - Gary
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Greg Gaul
Date: 3/6/2024 2:05:00 PM
Most appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 12/11/2023 5:46:00 PM
nicely expressed here -
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/12/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comment.

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