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Beyond Forever

Beyond forever Walk with me on golden fields, down paths built of love and we will share every breath of this journey with each other, step by wondrous step ~ Take my hand and we shall follow the sun wherever it may lead, along edges of time, uncounted minutes, shadows changing shape, for this is ours to hold endlessly ~ Sit with me and we will write poetic gardens filled with fragrant blooms, leaving petals of our words scattered about cobblestone walks for all to see ~ Wander with me. bringing smiles and laughter through forests of evergreen dreams, underbrush desires, finding the next vista painted in the beauty that awaits us ~ Stay with me and we shall love far beyond any borders, chasing moonbeams and stardust wishes till eternity whispers and we ignore it beyond forever

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Robert Lindley

Date: 1/5/2017 8:46:00 PM

Such free verse romance any lover would die for my friend. Your nailed this one. Every stanza golden, a new fav for me.. A7

Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2017 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much Robert for your kind and encouraging comments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2017 5:25:00 PM

WoW! Chris, this is so beautiful and romantic. I got lost in each and every word. It was such a lovely sight and sooo breathtaking. The ink in your pen is incredible. A without a doubt seven and fav .PS, I concur with Tom, you are the new King of Romance:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thank you so very much sweet Alexis, I truly do appreciate your visits and kindness always. Thank you again. :)

Cortney Bartholomew

Date: 1/4/2017 4:16:00 PM

You write so beautifully Chris! :) This is amazing!

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thank you so very much Cortney, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Kay Roberts

Date: 1/4/2017 4:13:00 PM

Chris, this is pure beauty.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thank you so very much Kay for your kind thoughts

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/4/2017 4:10:00 PM

Very romantic , Chris. In the book, lost horizons, beyond the horizon is shangri la:)

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:34:00 PM

I know that and now I wish I had thought of that when I wrote this. Thanks so much Daniel.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2017 3:06:00 PM

Very special Chris. :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/4/2017 2:53:00 PM

I am reading so much poetry these few days..Im seeing everything double by the end of the day...I'm seeimg 'Walk with me ' Twice...and 'Sit with me' twice.: )..Must be something in my eyes..smile: ). Won't be able to read as much when I'm back on my feet..so I am making the best of it..and the best of it is reading such a dreamy enchanting poem of invitation to joy such as this...A fave. Exceptional lines..Nothing more beautiful than to be writing poetry close to nature and to tthe one who has your heart.

Chris Green
Date: 1/4/2017 4:31:00 PM

Your beautiful comment just took my breath away, such kindness is a gift to my heart. My sweet friend, if you are seeing double then thankfully you are seeing it here, because I so love when you stop by to visit my poetry. Thank you again and again.