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Bewitching Nights

On a lonely night, ages ago A timid soul let her worries flow Into an abyss of filth and scars At the sight of a colossal yellow mass Million miles the mass traversed in vacuum To let its rays rekindle the flame of dying love with hue And to chase the ghosts of sorrows away To a land so barren and not so gay She shed the layers of gloom To let her naked soul eternally bloom Embrace did she every hued ray Which made love to her in a surreal way Every touch defined an era of mesmerizing warmth Of the twinkling stars and moon so calm The lonely nights,ever since, bestowed endless love on a soul with no kins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/23/2014 1:29:00 PM
Lovely write where imagery comes to the fore. The transaction is made effortlessly from dark to light. // paul
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:43:00 AM
Susmita, amazing write.. xox...SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Susmikta
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Susmita Das
Date: 1/10/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Ram
Date: 1/7/2014 3:36:00 PM
Susmita, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Susmita Das
Date: 1/7/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Linda :)
Date: 1/6/2014 4:41:00 PM
Susmita, not a sinless soul. I like this very much. morbid imagery, awesomely done...Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Susmita Das
Date: 1/7/2014 9:22:00 PM
Hi Skat...Thank you so much :-) I would indeed love to be your poetry soup Friend :) Hugs Sue
Date: 1/5/2014 9:16:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Susmita ! - A very nice poem !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Susmita Das
Date: 1/5/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Anne :) I will surely read and comment on the work of fellow poets... Wish you all the best for this year :)
Date: 1/5/2014 8:31:00 AM
Susmita, epic and good. . ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Susmita Das
Date: 1/5/2014 9:25:00 AM
Hi Linda... Thanks for your beautiful comment :) As I am new to poetry soup, I will perhaps take a bit of time to understand the things out there...It would be great if you could send me the link to your contest :) Take Care :)

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