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Bewitching Night

Lover 1 bewitching night screech owls mock our sighs toiled forest path Lover 2 lonely moonless sky thousand strokes of raven hair silk sheets undisturbed jasmine scented candles burn mother of pearl glistening Love Talks Contest Judged: 3/12/2011 Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi placed 7th

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Edwin in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/14/2011 5:09:00 AM

Edwin, congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/13/2011 8:56:00 PM

beautiful,Warm congrats..

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/13/2011 7:43:00 PM

Beautiful, scintillating images! I thought that this was ,by far, the best entry. Your lovers beckon with mysterious, natural portents. A great synthesis of fate and favor. This is the best poem that I have read in a while!

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful job, Edwin, it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in seventhplace honorable win, Agaape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/13/2011 12:34:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win with this great piece. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/13/2011 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Debbie, Edwin

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2011 7:28:00 PM

Congrats Edwin on your super win in Love Talk contest my friend with this awesome dialogue between the lovers luv.. enjoy another top ten win ...my friend....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2011 4:13:00 PM

Two very sharp contrasts in the perception of night, Edwin. Excellent duo here and congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/12/2011 4:03:00 PM

Very nice Edwin. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 3:52:00 PM

This one is beautiful, Edwin. I'm glad I am finally getting to see this. A big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2011 8:13:00 AM

Remember as long as you are under 17 in the haiku & under 31 in the tanka I don't care, haiku speaks in phrases because the intent is for the mesage to be very open ended someone might write a haiku to preceed YOUR group or a tank OR the might jump in and write a haiku AFTER your tanka, SO, no sentences, phrases, you are definetly on the right track! And lovely to FEEL an emotional CONTENT!![no need for is the, line 1] Thanks so much you are giving me hope! Light & Love