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Bewitched By Beauty

i feel this flowing like a fountain you are judging me on somebody else but it's certainly not me so i begin to draw for you paint a picture of your beautiful face this is so hard to really explain as you mean so much to me your sweet honey i am soft deep inside with a big heart smiling at the world but all i want to do is be every thing to your sweetheart loving you was my breeze feelings just keep floating emotions leaves fall unto your ground gently touching softly the heart singing it shines out glittering gold you are beautiful upon the crown you are my jewel queen of enchanting oceans its you baby i want draped around my neck

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/20/2014 9:19:00 AM
Its you baby I want draped around my neck-I really find this verse original and your poem utterly beautiful.
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Date: 2/20/2014 5:01:00 AM
Liam, Liam, Liam...this is just.....beyond beautiful. I don't know what to write to give justice to what I feel for this write. Lovely....We all carry baggage, and it's hard not to carry that with us. This is a clarion call to see people not with tinted glasses, but with clear ones.
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Date: 2/19/2014 4:27:00 PM
Simple to read and understand as it was also very descriptive.
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Date: 2/19/2014 4:22:00 PM
- Romantic and beautiful as always, Liam!! - A pleasure to read! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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