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Beware the Hollow (Footle Fright)

Beware the frights Hollow night calls Chilling Blood screams Silent heart cries Weary beings... Ghoulish tears stream... Crimson, cut-throats... Come see heads roll.... Ka-thunk, Ka-thunk... Evil's a--foot! Oh No ~ must Go... This Halloween piece is written for Donna Golden's Footle Fright Contest

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2010 6:11:00 PM

#7 ...I truely enjoyed...b4 I got 2 the end I said yes Halloween...Irma

Date: 11/18/2009 7:36:00 PM

Had to chuckle at the end. I like how the short lines lend drama. Sounds scary to me. Keep on writing!!! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2009 3:38:00 AM

Good luck in the contest. Nicely done work. Keep writing. Sara

Sue Mason

Date: 10/24/2009 11:05:00 AM

Good luck in the contest, Adell. This is a very clever winner with a form I have yet to try ... smile ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2009 6:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Adell. I look forward to reading more of it. Wishing the best to you in Donna's contest. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 5:54:00 PM

Good flow about fright night, Adell. SMILES, DAS-J