Betwixt

what a mix two souls betwixt, so closely come together, the lovers chance for sweet romance, escaping thoughts of never, perhaps perchance of happenstance, this time, next time forever? of: 'Michellesque' by Joe Maverick - Michelle Mac Donald Don

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/13/2012 7:33:00 AM

Good day Don, might be good evening in your parts, but the importance here is the 'good':) A lovely write...thank you for thinking of us! I have to repost a write for Joe...oh, he has the patience of a saint!:) He's probably wringing his hands, and if I don't wake up, he's a gonna want to wring my neck!:)) He truly deserves an outstanding write. You are very adept with your words and intention...thank you Don!! best wishes! love, Mikki

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/10/2012 1:55:00 PM

MMMM, nicely done..I agree with Russell..that "perchance' line is great. BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/10/2012 11:37:00 AM

Clever, very clever write my friend! I love the line, "perhaps perchance of happenstance," a lot, it just hit me and brought a smile to my face! You are so creative Don, a just love your style of writing! This write is magnificent and majestic at the same time! Great Work!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2012 11:28:00 AM

Well well Don I am real surprised and pleased that you thought of creating this piece loved the rich wording you employ, thank you a lot!!!