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Between Your Words

Between Your Words Dad I tried my best to live between your cruel words Yet there was no room I felt less smaller than small Like a comma that didn't fit a period in the wrong place a question not deserving an answer I wonder Now that you are gone Who's words had you borrowed? Did the pain you gave me come from another's broken heart? Was it too much to bear? I now have room at the end of your sentences. Not forced within the confines of your spaces No longer force fed the pearls of your wisdom You have not had the last word I am not doomed to your hypothesis I'm willing to dance on the edge of possible My cliff is of note worthy of jumping from For I am not Icarus I have no reason to fear the sun Only your ice will melt from my wings I do not wish to relive your convoluted nightmare The drifting of your mind Those barriers to my existence Freedom at last! Yes freedom at the end of your sentences. Dedicated to anyone who has been caught between words.

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Valsa George

Date: 12/16/2023 8:35:00 AM

"I felt less smaller than small Like a comma that didn't fit" This poem evokes powerful sentiments. How sad you were under your tyrannous father. I can hear the beats of your vulnerable heart. I am sure you don't harbor any bitterness for your father and you have forgiven him. A well composed piece to have been honored as POTD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2023 8:40:00 AM

I wrote another piece after this one titled Eddie. It is me finding compassion for my dad. Thanks for reading and commenting.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/9/2023 10:57:00 AM

Belated congrats Richatd on potd. You know I understand completely, well written and glad the cycle of abuse is broken.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/9/2023 3:02:00 PM

Much appreciated.

Harveen Kaur

Date: 9/10/2023 1:25:00 AM

Quite emotional and it’s brilliantly written. I like the lines- like a comma that didn’t fit, a period in the wrong place— i really love how you have expressed yourself here and it is truly awe inspiring.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2023 7:08:00 AM

Much appreciated. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/9/2023 3:08:00 PM

Belated congratulations Richard on this well written POTD. There's no excuse for verbal abuse but so many of did growing up in our homes. Thank you for writing this very beautifully written and so poetically well skilled poem on such an important topic.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2023 7:10:00 AM

Thanks for reading both poems. I appreciate your words and compassion.

Deb M

Date: 9/8/2023 7:27:00 AM

Sad, touching and oh so honest Richard….just lovely! Congratulations on POTD…..Debx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2023 8:39:00 AM

Much appreciated.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/7/2023 5:55:00 AM

The bond that exists between my Father and me is unbreakable; it is a force that runs deep within the soul. As I read your words, they penetrate the depths of my being, I can feel the pulsating rhythm of your heart, synchronized with every sentiment you convey. In order to progress and grow, it is essential to release the shackles of the past, allowing ourselves to move forward into the unknown. I extend my heartfelt congratulations to you, for receiving the esteemed honor of POTD.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2023 7:07:00 AM

Much appreciated. Please read my poem Eddie, it’s one of the pieces to this puzzle.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/6/2023 9:06:00 PM

All I can say is this really resonated with me, great write! Congrats on POTD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2023 7:07:00 AM

Thanks buddy.

Gary Radice

Date: 9/6/2023 12:24:00 AM

"I now have room at the end of your sentences." What a wonderful line among many Richard. A room to breathe, reflect, ask questions and to try to make sense of what's been before. Room, too, that has helped craft this poignant but ultimately positive poem...in your own words. Cheers - Gary

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:39:00 AM

Much appreciated. Thanks for giving it a read and taking time to comment. Do check out the sequel I posted yesterday. It helps make sense of this piece.

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/5/2023 7:46:00 PM

Such an emotive poem, Richard. A big contrast on POTD. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:40:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 10:16:00 PM

Thanks Akkina.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/5/2023 7:05:00 PM

Dear Richard, there's so many out there that have been, ''caught between words.'' I can honestly say, the connection is strong between me and father. My mother too. They are my rock ! I cherish my moments with them. Your words are difficult to read. I can feel your heart, and every emotion within. Moving forward is best, as you let go of the past. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:40:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 10:17:00 PM

As it should be. I am happy for you. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2023 2:59:00 PM

I can relate big time Richard and wrote my poem called 'broken' it is cathartic to write about our experiences in life and sad to see so many can relate, many congrats on POTD Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:40:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:30:00 PM

Thanks Jan. It was a pleasant surprise that it was chosen. I too am sorry so many have similar experiences.

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/5/2023 2:42:00 PM

I often wonder why in some families, one sibling grows up to be like the nasty parent, and another grows up to be the salt of the earth, even though both were treated equally bad by that parent, congratulations on a though provoking and deserved POTD, cheers David

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:41:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/5/2023 4:00:00 PM

I’m delighted to hear Richard that that particular cycle was completely broken, cheers David

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:32:00 PM

Fortunately my brother and sister also broke the cycle. Thanks for the visit David.

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/5/2023 12:31:00 PM

Often we don't know the pain others bear. Never do we deserve their pain expressed. Forgive and move on; our only hope. POTD sad and earned. :o/

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:41:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:33:00 PM

Yes forgiveness is more about ourselves that the o es we forgive.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/5/2023 9:58:00 AM

Back with congratulations on POTD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:41:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Eve.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/5/2023 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations Rick..Glad to re-read this gem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:42:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:35:00 PM

Much appreciated. Hugs Rick.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your powerful write/great ending. Love your line, "I now have room at the end of your sentences." Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:42:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:35:00 PM

Much appreciated.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 7:02:00 AM

Reflective insight at its best Richard. Congratulations on POTD! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:42:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:36:00 PM

Thanks. :0)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/5/2023 6:57:00 AM

Richard, a sad, emotive poem, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:43:00 AM

Check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:36:00 PM

Thanks Tania.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/5/2023 6:45:00 AM

This deserved Potd! Well done, and i hope many would read and know they are not alone feeling this, theres many who feel this way. Congratulations

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:43:00 AM

Please check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 3:37:00 PM

You are kind, much appreciated.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 6:35:00 AM

Your poem resonates strongly with me, Richard. A mindful write after contemplation. Congratulations on your POTD! Have a great day! Bill ps I'm following your poetry now.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:44:00 AM

Thanks Bill. Please check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/5/2023 6:09:00 AM

Rich: Your poem is such an example of self realization in a positive way and as unseeing seeker says with Ho’oponopono Your healing will begin. I always think these encounters with cruelty only make you stronger in the end. Bless you, friend, SuZ

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2023 5:44:00 AM

Please check out the sequel I posted yesterday.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 6:11:00 AM

Yes that can be true a yet I have witnessed the opposite as well. Thanks for your thoughtful visit.