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Between You and Me

Stuck alone I was on a large lift once. And that was indeed long ago, quite long— When the world was young, quite young, full of bounce. I groped and groped in vain, whistling a song! Groping in the dark for the alarm switch: All that I c’d wish for, all the while whistling, What’d have lifted my spirits in the glitch, Was my charming girlfriend—none intruding! But that was not to be; no, not to be. Now torn between discretion and passion, I am sonneteering: Woe unto me? No great loss, just a fleeting commotion! Well, I left the lift—left with self-pity. What a pity, though it all sounds witty! ***

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Date: 9/28/2017 1:33:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:35:00 AM
Interesting the thoughts that run through our minds when stuck in an uncomfortable situation. Nice write.
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Ram R. V.
Date: 9/28/2017 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, James, for your nice comments:)
Date: 9/27/2017 5:04:00 PM
Ram, love your fun sonnet, wonderful and congratulations on your win !
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Ram R. V.
Date: 9/27/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your congratulatory message. I'm glad that you love it. I'm glad, again, that I lost it to you after all! Let me congratulate you, too.:)
Date: 8/27/2017 11:04:00 AM
I wonder, although the dry wit is very much present underlying I sense wistfulness for moments lost.
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