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Between 2 Loves

I'm in between two loves. And I don't want to hurt these lovely doves. But my fear is to loose them both... because on either i'm unable to make an oath. The problem is that I must choose one, and the other will be gone. Oh! how I got betwix each twin. Now I wonder who will win.

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Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/5/2009 4:10:00 PM

Here's a suggestion for you to do. Flip a coin, and I'll take the twin that didn't win off your hands for you...Just kidding Ismael, I just wanted to thank you for your comment on my work. Nice piece by the way. I hope all worked out for all involved. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Ts Lewis

Date: 11/3/2009 11:11:00 AM

What does your heart say. Thanks for the comment. Keep writing

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2009 11:26:00 AM

If they know I bet that will make them very angry. Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 9/4/2009 11:59:00 PM

My, my between two loves, such a dilemma, may the best win. Sincerely, Moses