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Betting Against My Heart

Once again, you’re putting out your blinds It’s this wicked game you play at minds With the chiseled pot concealed, My heart’s cards are now revealed. I’m getting broken down again. You’ve locked me up into this stain, And as I try to raise heart’s chase You lay there still, poker faced. You force me into this blinding bet Where no one is allowed to check, Still you show me all your faces As your wretched cards take their places. ‘Guess I have to get a grip, Your words are dealing against my lip. For they’re begging me to call And see if I’ve lost my heart at all. I’m no longer your full (fool) of hearts, Letting you invade my private parts. I’ve beseeched for long enough For you to fall from your discomfited bluff. You stand as an immortal Ace, Wounded through my composed face. Though I never knew it could, My heart is now lost for good. © 2009 Stefania Carmen Misaila

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Date: 10/6/2009 3:35:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing poem making the semi finals. Good luck in finals! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:54:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2009 12:22:00 PM
unique love verse full of unrequited love. I never got to say welcome to the Soup!
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Date: 7/14/2009 5:36:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:49:00 PM
Stefania, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 6:39:00 AM
Nice blending of the idea with lost love for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem, well deserved Stephanie>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Stefania. May you have many many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations on this nice and deserving poem being featured this week. Welcome to the Soupland. Ernilando
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Date: 6/21/2009 10:31:00 AM
Great analogy here, Stefania and play (!) on cards ... don't think I've seen anything like this before on the Soup. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week and Welcome to PoetrySoup !!
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Date: 6/21/2009 8:28:00 AM
Congrats for being featured!
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Date: 6/19/2009 4:37:00 PM
"Soup Mail Gifted Lady!" ~
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations Stefania on the featuring of "Betting Against My Heart." Vince
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Stefania. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2009 7:09:00 PM
Stefania - I once felt the same way for many of years - Then I met met my wife - hopefully you shall become as blessed - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:20:00 AM
i hope that things are looking up since you wrote this. You are now the first poet ever to go into my favourite poets. cant wait to get a chance to catch up on the other poems you have put on here.
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Date: 5/18/2009 2:05:00 PM
I like your expressiveness in the poem. The rhyming pattern also tells a story. Things are always changing; nothing is permanent. I like the essence of the piece. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/11/2009 10:59:00 AM
This is AMAZING! I love it for sure. Congrats on this piece of art. One for the favs =) ~Jese
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Date: 5/10/2009 11:22:00 AM
Nicely written Stefania! Welcome to the soup! - jeremiah
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Date: 5/10/2009 9:39:00 AM
A lovely written poem Stefania, James.
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Date: 5/8/2009 5:15:00 AM
This rhyme poem is full of sentiment and your pain shows through. That is good writing. I hope things work out for your happiness, whereever God leads. Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:30:00 PM
Pretty words flow...ryhming with sound. This is a piece of poem cherished. Nice and not cluttered. I wish you all the best.
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Date: 5/7/2009 6:31:00 AM
Nice.
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