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Better Than the Rest

Some think she has a crooked nose And real sad sleepy eyes Her hips they said, had to have spread To compensate those thighs But I just think, those things are there To put me to the test To see if I would realize She's better than the rest She didn't come from money But I wouldn't say's she's poor When I see her on that sofa bed I couldn't ask for more My friends say find a better girl I say "You be my guest" Cause I tell you now, straight from my heart She's better than the rest chorus They say that she's not good enough For a cover of a magazine But went she holds me, late at night She's my beauty Queen repeat She didn't come from money But I wouldn't say's she's poor When I see her on that sofa bed I couldn't ask for more My friends say find a better girl I say "You be my guest" Cause I tell you now, straight from my heart She's better than the rest chorus They say that she's not good enough For a cover of a magazine But went she holds me, late at night She's my beauty Queen

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Date: 10/3/2014 8:04:00 PM
I like this Jerry, I think it is great...Sharon G.
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Date: 9/29/2014 6:18:00 PM
singing of the page beautiful piece
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/29/2014 6:21:00 PM
Thanks Liam
Date: 9/29/2014 4:00:00 PM
This is great.....You always come up with these catchy tunes....cheers
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/29/2014 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Tim, I really appreciate your comments and encouragement
Date: 9/29/2014 2:57:00 PM
A brilliant realistic love song Jerry embracing her imperfections and expressing you love her just the way she is - it's a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/29/2014 5:58:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I really believe if someone is to find true love, One must be free from expectations. Hugs and thanks for the 7

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