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Better Late Than

Last year Santa took a long time to come The reindeer waited ages, and then some Rudolf got so snappy Mrs Claus was happy As his sack somehow didn't look so plump By David Kavanagh

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Arlo Parker

Date: 11/29/2022 10:30:00 AM

Secret Santa not so secret after all! Jolly indeed!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/29/2022 10:53:00 AM

Cats out of the bag Arlo, sorry I mean sack, lol, cheers David

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/21/2022 3:25:00 AM

David, this is a great one. Best wishes in the contest. Pangie

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/21/2022 4:26:00 AM

Thank you Pangie for stopping by, all a bit of fun when in Limerick land, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/19/2022 5:38:00 PM

I guess Jennas elf chimed Santas belles after all! This year, I'm giving it to someone special.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/20/2022 1:08:00 AM

Lol, sounds about right Anaya, I was always led to believe Santa’s sack was a cornucopia, but perhaps Mrs Claus is the only one who can put a dent in it, cheers David

Charles Messina

Date: 11/19/2022 4:28:00 AM

Happy wife, happy life...even in Santa Land. LOL Good Luck in the contest, Dave. Charlie

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/19/2022 4:52:00 AM

Never truer words Charlie! if Santa cannot keep his wife happy with that enormous sack of goods, what chance for us mere mortals lol, cheers David

Anselmo Boles

Date: 11/18/2022 6:41:00 PM

Hahaha! My interpretation might be way out to left field I'll stay mum. Very funny, great job Dave!!...ab

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/19/2022 12:27:00 AM

Oh you know Anselmo when in Limerick land, we must follow our instincts, I think your interpretation is well within the bounds, I’m delighted you enjoyed the Hijinks, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/17/2022 10:21:00 AM

At least she won't have to say, I'm washing my hair lol. Good luck David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/17/2022 10:32:00 AM

Yeah Tom! sounds like he left plenty of toys behind to keep her amused for a while lol, cheers David