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Better Days

With battles fought, the wounds endured these days shall pass, I am assured The veil of winter shall lift in spring A bird in mourning shall one day sing But with the cloak of darkest day comes bitter wind and skies of gray A tidal wave to calm the sea upon the shore, I wait for thee My heavy heart sinks into sand until you come and take my hand A promise of despair no more to find the love I'm waiting for A rescue from the rolling shore and peaceful days forevermore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/30/2012 8:50:00 AM
Blessed I am to read this poem once more and another congratulations for #1 in Brians contest. Awaiting the peaceful days again once more myself.....so this touched me deeply.
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your over the top win in Brian's "#179 Contest" Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/29/2012 6:00:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 5/27/2012 7:51:00 PM
Very beautiful !!
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Date: 5/27/2012 2:11:00 PM
Such a flowing write and heavenly theme! Yes, one day all the chaos will be cured! Congrats, Rhonda! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/26/2012 8:51:00 PM
ahhhhhhh...and sighhhhhs galore. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. The couplets are well written and blend together well. Enjoyed !! Congratulations on your amazing win !!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 6:49:00 PM
Superb poem dear!!! Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 5:53:00 PM
the title for this one is perfect. I love this and congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/26/2012 5:32:00 PM
Man, oh man, Gurl, this is ART. Love it. The heartbreak and hope are well understood and so perfectly melded... hugs... cyndi
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Date: 5/26/2012 2:58:00 PM
congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:06:00 AM
one love that you will have forevermore, is love of your child,as well as love from our heavenly father, I love your poem, happy mother's day dear Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:40:00 AM
Simply beautiful! This poem has a nice flow and a beautiful message:)
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