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Bette Davis Eyes

my love, would you mind if i took the time to share a lovely chill that tickles my smile? it's your eyes! i'm afraid that i lose myself in them in their promise in their million shades of a million blues i have to confess they inspire in me a romantic desire. when your eyes touch mine my thoughts hitchhike on a highway of mischief like a teenager barefoot on scorching hot slate. sometimes my sweet i imagine diving head first into our locked stare there i bathe in the milk of your dream eyes and in the fix of my wake i reach the surface drenched in the solitude of your loving glare. i feel compelled to tell you that my body my whole body trembles in my admiration of them what I am trying to say my love is oh my God your eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/6/2014 8:07:00 PM
hey, this is the where I FIRST faved you, Maurice. I was looking at the next poem as I go toward your most recent one. I think I am going to find more of yours I have not seen yet!!
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:07:00 PM
And I love how you replied to my comment I had made back then in August!!
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Date: 8/25/2014 5:50:00 PM
I LOVE THIS!!!! You are a really good new poet here. FAVE poet, I add you to my list!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/26/2014 12:20:00 PM
oh my goodness you are such an amazing writer. my face is turning red. thank you for the support.
Date: 8/25/2014 5:50:00 PM
I loved that song from the 80's.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/26/2014 12:15:00 PM
me too
Date: 8/25/2014 4:13:00 PM
Lovely write - eyes are the windows to the soul Maurice - love the title great song by Kim Carnes:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/25/2014 4:22:00 PM
i love Kim Carnes voice. lots of love.

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