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Betrayed

The majority in this lost world believe upon it living it's tale that this is all there is to be nothing more or less in its trail What a betrayal is all this believing on what is just a lie scripture declares we were created for a purpose not just to die All that this world has to offer betrays mankind at the very heart for satisfaction will never be found till God is placed at that centre part God wants us to be His own personally and particularly at our side showing us real life to the full eternally holding us to constantly abide Don't listen to this world's voice it's a lie not telling what's true taking you down to eternal doom don't be betrayed rise leave that queue Believe and trust the God of love His promise is to take you home above (Quote 'The world betrays everyone with its message of promising so much and delivering little of nothing as there's only one hope to cling to!' -anon.

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Date: 5/19/2016 12:27:00 PM
Interesting existential write, Gordon, and well expressed - that indeed "it's a lie"!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/19/2016 12:34:00 PM
thanks Michael!
Date: 5/19/2016 9:00:00 AM
I enjoyed your play of rhymes: heart -part, tale-trail, love-above, the Betrayed Great Expectations and Promise of Happiness each poetry (and art) may bring for everybody forever .Feelings swimming in the river of time and hope. Congrat.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/19/2016 9:23:00 AM
thanks Ovidiu, glad you enjoyed it, blessings, Gordon

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