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Betrayed

I shared with you something so special to me. I let loose something I can't take back. Today, you hurt me calling her baby Making those funny comments. I hurt deep inside. A softer part died The tears stay unshed I am drowning where my soul dwells. My emotions, so confused, as am I. The deepest part of my heart Holds tight to the past. When can I release?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2010 10:00:00 AM
LOVED YOUR BETRAYED POEM.I UNDERSTAND THE DEEPER THE TEARS .THE DEEPER A POEM GETS. YOUR POEM IS SO DEEP .ITS HARD FOR ONE TO RELEASE. GOOD POEM....I.T.
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