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Betrayed

im shaking in my chair im ripping out my hair falling in blank stare breathing the cold air im feeling from your shoulder i guess its cause we're older we used to be so cool till u started acting like such a fool u chose everyone but me be the person to make you happy i was there when u thought everything was unfair i was by your side every moment u wanted to cry i whispered in your ear that with me you have nothing to fear but you turned your back on a person that did so much to keep u in touch with the person inside the person u seem to hide i picked up the pieces when u fall and know your too good to answer my call wow i thought i was your man and thought i was your lover and your best friend betrayal is what i see and your slowly pushing to edge im extending my hand but im stretching like a rubber band band and we're slipping grip and your not even starting to trip with a look like you don't care like we never breathed the same air and now i see in the halls u walk past you don't look my way or give me the time of day you really broke my heart and was the reason we broke apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/7/2009 5:06:00 PM
Deeply into point... nice work
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:35:00 PM
Acts of betrayal can turn a life upside down. Your heartfelt message was vividly conveyed, Eric. Thanks for sharing this with us; I think everyone can relate to the feeling you described. Love, Carolyn
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