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Betrayal Demands An Audience

Betrayal Demands An Audience Pretty smiles dressed in camouflage full in view but hidden talking sincerity to silent attentive listeners. Impressive Actor his stage now set for betrayal demands an audience he's inspired from arising cheers see, his deceitful decorations near. And when found out he's drawn them in his performance was just to win his stage impressive and the Actor glorious for the betrayal demands an audience.

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John Fleming

Date: 7/22/2017 4:53:00 PM

I agree with Barry, Jackie - An excellent poem - Deserves more exposure! Best regards. :) john P.s I have enjoyed reading through some of your poetry tonight Jackie. :) Will visit again sometime - Cheers!

Jackie Elston
Date: 7/22/2017 5:37:00 PM

Thank John for your kind comments tonight and taking the time to read my poems, its much appreciated. l noticed l will have to edit some of my little spelling mistakes in my poems when l re read them,which l hadn't noticed before lol..l have to write very quickly as l forget my thoughts so fast due to brain fog (l have severe M.E ) thank you again. Jackie

Barry Stebbings

Date: 7/8/2017 2:34:00 PM

Brilliant Jackie, Betrayal found out. LIke it // Barry.

Jackie Elston
Date: 7/8/2017 3:47:00 PM

Thank you Barry for the comment, that was very kind. l wasn't too sure about posting at first as l wrote the poem very quickly and wondered if it looked finished but when l typed it out l was pleased with it. Just one typo though on line 8, should say'an' instead of 'and'.But still very pleased with this one. take care. Jackie