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Betrayal

His woman gone Slain by betrayed words, Playing on her innocence With pack of lies--- A deceitful male charmer. For the Contest, Something With Great Impact 19 Dec 2015 Rora Onna ---19 words

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:52:00 AM
AMELIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 4:00:00 PM
Betrayal and deceit...a topic capably tackled, Amelie, and a most worthy winner too! Congratulations!! ~ All the best // paul
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:16:00 AM
Oh, yes! Great subject for this contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations. SKAT
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Date: 12/20/2015 5:53:00 AM
unique way of conveying the theme, rora...huge congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs
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