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(Rhyme) I've stared at the face of love and found it that it was in the end quite false. In my heart here am crying how could this ever be when all that I gave you from the start was my love. The truth of your betrayal just went straight to my heart you stabbed me one thousand times right on the back. when all I did was to trust you and nothing for you held back my love but you all that gave me in the end were tears pain and more sorrow. Nothing much of your professed devotion to my bruised love you did show I guess at the end of the day all you made me look was like a complete fool for believing that your love and vows were like mine just true and so cool. I see now that you never really loved me all these years as you insisted And all that I now see is that your love was never true for me indeed. I just cant believe now that I was so naïve and foolish You with all your lies kept me hoping and just from your strings dancing. How could you be so cruel and give me the last blow of all at the end When all I wanted to do back then was to stay with you forever and ever You just took my love and carelessly threw it back hatefully on my heart and face. My poor heart is so darn broken and only lived for so long cause of Gods grace Your betrayal cuts very deep little by little and when you went for my heart Nothing prepared me with all the pain and the darkness that you sank me in. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,18,2014 Written on June,16, 2014

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Date: 11/19/2014 7:46:00 AM
"D" One feels the utter passion and emotion of your write here. I, too, have touched on the betrayal theme in a few of my poems too. It always constitutes that negative flip side to all those things that are bright, shiny, and flourishing with love and positive emotion. When this happens from someone you know (or thought you knew), the affect of the knife wound can be even greater with all of the attendant "pain" and "darkness." A most marvelous write here. A "7" and a FAV!! Best Always!! Gary
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/20/2014 12:06:00 AM
Gary my very sweet friend thank you so much for all your visits and kindness! Much appreciated. :) xxxx D.
Date: 11/18/2014 8:18:00 AM
oh how i know that deep feeling dear friend tears deep for some i think get a kick out of hurting love never makes sense to me dorian excellent pen full of raw emotions bless you
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Date: 11/20/2014 12:04:00 AM
Hello, my dear friend Liam! Thank you so very kindly for dropping by! :) xxxxx D.
Date: 11/18/2014 2:44:00 AM
Excellent. Very emotional and touching write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/20/2014 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Ravi! :) xxxx D.
Date: 11/18/2014 2:41:00 AM
Great Poem Emotional Poem I love this poem
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/20/2014 12:02:00 AM
Thsnk you so much Chris! :) Xxxx D
Date: 11/18/2014 12:27:00 AM
The heart is so fragile and trusting until broken. After that, it can never be the same. A lovely heartfelt write from you Dorian!
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Date: 11/20/2014 12:01:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Connie! :) xxxx D.

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