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Betrayal

Between him and me, soulful love thrived, Enthralling, enchanting and everlasting delight, To my shock, why did he betray me and life, Recalling the worst, in nightmares I strife, Always, everyday thinking of him, I slowly die, Yesterday is bygone, why do I keep living a lie, Another present day lost, my future is no gain, Love if may I believe, is born and reborn again! Written on 11/7/14 Contest- Acrostic time#2 Sponsor- PD A Ranked 9th

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Date: 8/23/2014 1:40:00 AM
I think that everyone can relate to these words, Dr. Upma. We all have longed for a lost love, that may or may not return to us....Never give up on love!.... A great acrostic poem, Dr. Upma. Very expressive! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/19/2014 5:17:00 PM
Prodigious win!!! Sara
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Date: 8/19/2014 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!! A sad tale repeated far too often in this cruel world!!
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:24:00 AM
sad acrostic beautifully penned, my congratulations on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:59:00 AM
Sad and touchy acrostic. Dr. Upma. congrats
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Date: 8/18/2014 7:22:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for the awesome Acrostic Poem. Enjoy my blog "Dedicated to You" --and YOU" if you like. Have fun enjoying all the winning poems. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/21/2014 11:52:00 PM
Yes it is reborn again! The pain pounds in your chest, but does abate, leaving only sweet remembrance. Cherish that pain, it grows you and makes new love all the more precious.
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:41:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me for the contest..Way to go..Sad to be betrayed by one that we love..We probably expect that from our enemies but not our loved ones..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/11/2014 7:52:00 AM
How sad...I want to give you a hug...I feel your pain....I love your dash of alliteration ...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/11/2014 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Tim! I desperately need ur hugs!

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