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Below is the poem entitled BETRAYAL which was written by poet doreen cyr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Loyal and blind, I believed in you.
A mother, even though not of birth.
Trusting your love and caring true.
I grieve as dead, feeling no worth.

Mourning with heavy heart and soul.
The clues of truth run through my mind.
Little things, telling things, won't let go.
Denial and disbelief, in thoughts do bind.

To know but not to believe, overlook.
I am to blame for this blind heart ache.
The signs ignored, years it took.
You can't hide now, you were a fake.

SEPT. 11, 2010

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  1. Date: 10/10/2010 7:41:00 PM
    sad thoughts... to be fake....what i am not me?? after all? oh well

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 3:19:00 PM
    Hi Doreen. So sad and yet somehow beautiful,the words and the way it reads.Betrayal so hard to forget let alone forgive.I don't know if this expressive of your own hurt or poetic empathy.But either way as I said this is beautiful.Thank you for sharing. luv June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 12:18:00 PM
    Doreen your poetry is great ! hoping to read more soon. God Bless... Peter K

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 1:36:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry soup, Doreen. Your poem is quite fascinating and is really I couplet, I think. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/13/2010 5:59:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Doreen. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 1:00:00 PM
    deep write and strong feelings in this, enjoyed your write today, best wishes for you this weekend..P.D.

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 12:31:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck..with luv..

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 9:22:00 AM
    Hi Doreen, It sounds like you've experienced a lot of pain from this deception. There are a lot of deceivers out there, but I hope you find someone who is sincere. (I'm new here, too, and they have some fun contests you can enter.) Take care, Diane

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 9:12:00 AM
    First of all, sis, welcome to the Soup! I love this denouement...bitter and biting but always have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself...*hugz* Dory