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Best Year of My Life

The greatest year of my life Contains days that bring elation Pure joy and love abound Surrounding my very body, infused I lovingly asked my girlfriend To finally be my wife We were united with future hope We shopped in a mall with glee Finding presents of memories Love empowered that loving day Brought complete joy to our hearts Happiness was riding deep within us Finally the horse drawn carriage Going through downtown I asked her there with a poem And with a ring we were one This is a day we’ll never forget I was just at a tender young age I was only twenty-two (22) Russell Sivey Entrant into Nette Onclaud's "....AT THIS AGE" contest

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Date: 1/20/2012 11:21:00 PM
I have seen three others she was mean to tonight, russell. Go see Greg Stanley. he was one of them too.
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:14:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:13:00 PM
CONGRATS RUSSELL ON A MOVING PIECE FOR A WINNING POEM.. U CONVEYED SUCH EMOTION IN THESE LINES..LUV..
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:30:00 AM
A sweet memory to write on.Beautiful poem here Russell.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:23:00 AM
Congrats again on your win, loved it, bl
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:14:00 PM
YAY for this one on the list. GREAT title for a poem like this, full of joy. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:59:00 PM
I enjoyed this sweet write, Russell! Congrats on the win! Such sweet memories! Smiles from Cyndi
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Date: 1/13/2012 5:43:00 PM
How romantic, Russell. Congratulation on your win with this fine write.
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Date: 1/5/2012 9:34:00 PM
you sound like the man of my dreams. GEEEZ, I didn't even get a proposal!! It was all "just assumed" GREAT entry for her contest, Russell.
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:59:00 PM
Sounds like heaven has arrived, and Russell was there too, very nice poem style n size, an you were 22....
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Date: 1/5/2012 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful day to remember Russell.Lovely poem - you have to win in the contest to. OXOX love Anne-Lise
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