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We walked as one in love's embrace Wind at our backs, sea in our face Thinking of naught but love that night Light of the moon, it was so bright Seeing only my love's sweet face. We sought no more than love and lace The winds of fate are often base We lose too much when out of sight We walked as one Destiny sometimes displays grace A lover's fight we can embrace A wrong word works wickedly right An arrow shot down from the height Too often our love is debased We walked as one July 10, 2016

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Date: 7/14/2016 4:20:00 PM
Nice effort. Felt the love. Congrats.
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R.A. Marschall
Date: 7/14/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment
Date: 7/14/2016 11:47:00 AM
RA, beautiful poem...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/14/2016 8:44:00 PM
Was a great pleasure and challenge being part of your contest. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.

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