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Best Pick Up Line

You are so beautiful, please forgive me for staring!

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Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 6/8/2015 1:39:00 PM

Lol...

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/17/2015 7:06:00 PM

A sweet line and if said sincerely would have you picking up ladies swiftly. Congrats on your awesome win! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 9:37:00 PM

I only need one and she is indeed beautiful. Hugs back to you Cecilia.

Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2015 12:30:00 PM

incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Funom.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 5/7/2015 7:25:00 PM

Women will fall for that! Lol! What a great pick up line, Rick. Congrats on your win. I wondered if you got my soupmail that I sent few days ago. Wishing you a great day :D g, yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 9:06:00 AM

Hi Yanny, I will check.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2015 4:29:00 PM

came back here to remember what you wrote. So what happened to simply "HI"!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2015 5:24:00 PM

I thought I might need a few more words for the contest *lol*.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/6/2015 4:12:00 PM

So very classic..but it works! congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2015 12:04:00 AM

Thanks Janet.

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2015 10:02:00 AM

Richard :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2015 12:05:00 AM

Thanks SKAT.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2015 9:30:00 AM

Richard, a sweet one. I hate when Nathan stares at me too long. Guuuurrrrrr! LOL, He'll say. "I just love looking at you." I'm like gosh, it's so annoying. After 5 years, I will catch him staring at me, then he turns away. LOL, Good for him. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2015 12:06:00 AM

It is good that he is captivated by you! Thanks for commenting Linda.

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/6/2015 1:59:00 AM

Oh Richard I wonder what I would have answered? ...Congrats ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Seren, what would you have answered??

Judy Konos

Date: 5/5/2015 9:13:00 PM

Most gentle pickup I've ever heard....Thank you for being in my contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:21:00 AM

My pleasure Judy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2015 5:08:00 PM

so was that YOUR pickup that worked best. I LIKES it!!! Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, in truth I would just smile and say hi.

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 5/5/2015 4:59:00 PM

You went into that one open eyed till she pulled out the mace Richard. Congratulations on your win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:24:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks Robert.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/5/2015 4:46:00 PM

Very honest pick-up line, Richard! I see that congrats are in line, too. // Thank you for reading and commenting on my senryu "Love is Free". // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I could never use one of those what's your Sign lines myself.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2015 4:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Eve and blessings to you as well.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2015 2:47:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:19:00 AM

Thanks and Hugs back.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/4/2015 6:30:00 AM

I forgive you for staring Richard...Happens all the time. Can't help it if I'm so beautiful, I was born that way. It's a curse I tell you, a CURSE!...VERY good and original pick-up line my friend! Gotta remember to try this next time I go out...

Tim Ryerson
Date: 5/4/2015 8:27:00 AM

Right you are Richard...I have been humiliated on many occasions...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2015 8:15:00 AM

The only thing that exceeds your good looks is your humility! Thanks for the smile.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/3/2015 5:04:00 PM

Worst Pick up line: Is your dad a baker? cause you sure have great buns!

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/3/2015 2:17:00 PM

aww you can be forgiven for anything with that line ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:31:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, I prefer a simple approach.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/3/2015 1:08:00 PM

;) Awwwwww....beauty is in the eye of the beholder...would be my rejoinder to that line! We have a saying here that goes something like this..."Your eyes are beautiful." (Meaning...that's why you see me that way.) Lovely, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2015 7:33:00 AM

That is a perfect response, thanks Eileen.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2015 12:43:00 PM

aww cuteeeee:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 12:51:00 PM

awww so sweet love it even more! hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2015 12:50:00 PM

I rewrote it.