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Best of Me

I feel the love I once had has been sucked out of me like water from a cloud, I feel nothing it is not me to hide in the dark with no light to be seen but I have given you the best of me what have you given me I wear my heart on my sleeve & you take advantge but I won't change, not for you today I realise I'm not your fool & I don't need you like you think you need me, is what I now see...

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Date: 1/10/2013 10:47:00 AM
Ooooo..A very strong write. Nice one! :o)
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Date: 1/7/2013 6:46:00 PM
Very powerful words. I have not used poetry to this end in my brief time of writing, but I do find this very powerful.
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Date: 1/4/2013 7:10:00 AM
THEY SAY LOVE IS BLIND i WONDER SHOULD ANYONE WARE THERE HEART ON THERE SLEAVE COOL WRITE AGAIN KEEP THEM COMING XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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