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BESIDE ME

just lay here beside me
where the lillies talk to the orange sky
and the evening wind titters all around the place.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2009 12:38:00 PM
    i'm feelin' it KK nice write

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 5:09:00 PM
    k k...sweet verse full of longing. On my verse Entwine me. You said Are you serious?hmmmmm...The You I spoke of was capitalized because I was alluding to God ;)..and Yes I was seriuos! Light & Love always and please enter my "Dialect Contest" if you haven't already!

  1. Date: 8/30/2009 4:31:00 AM
    Nicley written poetry. Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 10:45:00 AM
    awwwwwwww what a man! I've missed your love verses!!! Light & Love PS I expect a dialect poem out of you! Showing us what the language of your land sounds like?

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 8:33:00 AM
    This haiku is abolutely wonderful, KK!! Every line is fantastic. It's going to my favs. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 8:11:00 AM
    Thank you for your welcome comments today KK,Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 4:34:00 AM
    This goes to my favs my friend,it is so beautiful--charma

  1. Date: 8/1/2009 11:22:00 AM
    beautiful thought. Moses

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 3:12:00 PM
    What a lovely image you have created with your colorful words, k.k. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 9:59:00 AM
    stronger verse without the last 4 words ;) I know you didn't like my Gramp no wonder please read Idella....his wife :). You have mail.

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 3:25:00 PM
    Hello,few words from your heart and soul-beautiful painting you ve created--charma