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Beside a Rippling Stream

Under star studded sky And bright moon low I wrap you in My loving glow Whispering words Of love you so As camp fire burns With flames high We drift as lovers In night sky Cuddle up tight In lovers delight Beside a rippling Stream tonight

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David Scott

Date: 1/30/2013 12:04:00 PM

NICE INTROSPECTION OF ONES LOVE FOR ANOTHER XDAVIDSCOTT

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/29/2013 8:51:00 PM

A wonderful piece of art.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/29/2013 10:48:00 AM

Oh as the stream flows so does your wonderful poetry...this is so good...

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 4:52:00 PM

Thank you Harry, love Elizabeth

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2013 7:41:00 AM

This makes me long for the summer, a campfire, and a night under the pinetrees. Lovely poem, Elizabeth!

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Carrie, me too :) love Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2013 7:36:00 PM

Hello Elizabeth, Very bright very beautiful. A drifting view.. love the passionate moment to come :-) always~ LINDA

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 12:22:00 AM

Thank you PD, love Elizabeth