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Berry Mad

Jerry Cherry loves a berry, Be it black or blue, He also loves the red ones, He ate quite a few. He didn't like picking them, So he bought them from a shop, He mixed some with ice-cream To make a berry slop.

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Tim Smith

Date: 5/10/2015 9:18:00 PM

Nice John....I can see this continuing on...it has a nice rythmn

John Williams
Date: 5/11/2015 3:08:00 AM

It will continue on Tim next time berries are in season....haha......thanks for stopping in Tim....kind regards.....John

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/10/2015 8:51:00 PM

This would make a great children's rhyme. A delightful write! Love, Kim

John Williams
Date: 5/11/2015 3:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim. 90% of what i write is designed for children....kind regards----John

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/10/2015 7:35:00 PM

G'day John... Jerry Cherry reminds me of myself John. At one time I collected and grew bush tucker plants and enjoyed appleberries, native cherries, native elderberry, native currants, but not kangaroo apple (yuk!) although I never made a berry slop... I should have - thanks John - Lindsay

John Williams
Date: 5/10/2015 8:07:00 PM

Wow Lindsay, I am glad I brought back good memories for you. It must have been very interesting growing all those bush tucker plants. Thanks for having a read Lindsay,.........kind regards-----John