Berry

Die my little cherry You unearthly rotten berry I won't sit on your cloud Because of you, I am not proud You're just a wicked canker soar Of you there are plenty more Die my little cherry You unearthly rotten berry Your tastes have gone sour You were never a pretty flower I watch you wilt and weaken Your branches look ill and beaten Looks like you're out of season...

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Ann Foster

Date: 10/6/2019 10:07:00 AM

I love cherries... I have a bad trouble with pineapple... ouch... but I so love pineapple...it is not fair. Loved your poem the best. Write more my friend. This was great.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 5:38:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ashley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2011 2:27:00 PM

beautiful rhyming with nice expressions on berry, Ashley

Ashley Wilson
Date: 5/13/2011 9:29:00 PM

thank you very much for the positive feedback!