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Bequeath of Teeth

Not to question the Almighty Though when planning out our life He Might have done a better job In the designing of the gob For in the matter of our teeth Far from a permanent bequeath They’re like friends for aye of sorrow Here today and gone tomorrow I suggest a bold revisor For the molars and incisors Chance in later evolution A less transient solution Consider hair; it keeps on growing In a breeze we feel it blowing Head, and chin, and neath the nose Waving free or tied in bows As predictable as dawning It gets longer every morning So on schedule or a whim We go and get ourselves a trim What if our teeth would thus renew In covenant that’s firm and true Then after every loss of bite We’d grow a fresh and pearly white The mission then of dentistry Not: fight growth of entropy! But with the novel fresh mandate To tend our crops and cultivate With grin physicians then we’d be Relaxed within their company Not as a blessing to endure But for their oral haute couture

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Date: 2/21/2022 3:55:00 AM
Brilliant - as are the comments and your reply to Suzanne's fascinating idea. :) I worry for the day my dentist says my teeth are fine but my gums need to come out. Great poem Geoffrey! Cheers - Gary
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/16/2022 2:44:00 AM
Thanks for your kind response, Gary.
Date: 2/5/2022 7:19:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed your musings on teeth, Geoffrey... The question of 'Why?' gnaws at me now. Why did the Creator give us this challenge? Thought-provoking write (for me, anyway). Thanks, Gershon
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/16/2022 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon.
Date: 1/29/2022 9:51:00 AM
I love the question, Geoffrey and your playful handling of it. Maybe we can get a genetic transplant from sharks. Sharks don't actually regrow teeth one by one but have multiple rows inside their jaw that are constantly regrown. Best, SuZ
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 2/4/2022 4:07:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne. Yes, why not borrow from the shark genome. Though we might need to inhibit the urge to bite legs off.
Date: 1/14/2022 6:56:00 PM
What a fun poem to read..very entertaining, too! Enjoyed this! :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/15/2022 10:59:00 AM
Glad you like it. Thanks for letting me know.
Date: 1/13/2022 4:17:00 PM
Hilarious! True -- from you lips to God's ears. Love it! AS far as hair goes, no more on my head where I would like it -- everywhere else, Egads! Joe. Oh! What about the nose? -- last thing I need getting larger, with an aging stomach.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/14/2022 1:15:00 AM
And another thing! I’ve got a growing list of complaints, in every sense of the word. But your responses are a blessing, Joe
Date: 1/13/2022 3:28:00 AM
You had me giggling over the hair—picturing nose hair in bows. The body is a traitor! Enjoyed this Geoffrey! I hope you are doing well :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/14/2022 1:13:00 AM
A giggle a day keeps the dentist away! Thanks for the acknowledgement, P.S.

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