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Bent Over Town

Woody structures balance along the wind gusts make the town seem empty No gas at the station where to go? One dreamer might fly with its wings bent over the town in the blue sky Desperate and full of dust lies the town wind is the only visitor but once in a while… Skies change their color and a man flies like a bullet with its wings bent over town People recognize the flying man as the Town Lord who brings a bright blue sky over town

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Date: 5/19/2021 6:21:00 PM
I like this very much. Who is the man you write of? This man of mystery that brings blue light to the skies.
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Vasco Ludovice
Date: 5/21/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for your nice words! :) I don't know too who he is. Just know that he flies high in these blue skies.
Date: 5/11/2021 12:55:00 PM
Hello Vasco,reading this poem really made my imagination fly. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Vasco Ludovice
Date: 5/16/2021 6:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene! Have a Good day my friend! :)
Date: 3/13/2021 3:10:00 PM
Although I am not sure I understood some of it, I really liked this poem, Vasco. It was almost like an ekphrasis on "town," but then it sort of shifted like the wind, "the only visitor." Nice work.
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Vasco Ludovice
Date: 3/13/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much L Milton! I really appreciate your words! Yes indeed I like the contrast between the town and this Great flying man

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