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Beneath Beneath my tall pine tree, below an engraved stone, buried is my sweet friend beloved for twenty years; been missing him so long. Beside his grave, sad and bereft....I hear soft purrs. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Pleiades B Sponsor: Kim Merryman Judged: 08/19/2016 Note: “beloved” has the strange property of having two different acceptable pronunciations: (two syllables, pronounced like “bi-loved”) and (three syllables, pronounced like “bi-love-id”). Reference: http://linguisticmystic.com/page9/

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Date: 9/6/2016 6:35:00 AM
oh Sandra, how sad, yet written so beautifully.. congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/21/2016 8:47:00 PM
a well deserved win, Sandra! Congrats.
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:59:00 PM
A sad, lovely poem, Sandra. Twenty years is a long time, no wonder he's missed so much! Congratulations on this deserved win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:28:00 AM
Congrats, Sandra. Sad and beautiful.
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Date: 8/20/2016 10:58:00 AM
Congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 8/20/2016 8:36:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 8/20/2016 7:40:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/20/2016 4:17:00 AM
Touching and very lovley Sandra! I am happy to see this high on the winning list! Congratulations my friend! : ) 7
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:50:00 AM
Back to tell my congratulations:)
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Date: 8/19/2016 9:59:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
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Date: 8/19/2016 7:47:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your 2nd place win! Your poem really touched me as we had to put our cat down last week. I love your last line. Blessings!
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Date: 8/19/2016 12:22:00 PM
Bereft, bereft. Everyone's using my word, bereft. I am ... bereft! ;-) Condolences to your departed feline, Sandra....
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Date: 8/19/2016 5:58:00 AM
Beautiful:) A winner in my eyes:)
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Date: 8/17/2016 6:47:00 AM
- Touching beautifully, Sandra - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:06:00 PM
oh my, such a sad one. and so well done!!
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Date: 8/16/2016 3:06:00 PM
Very moving.
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Date: 8/16/2016 11:44:00 AM
aww Sandra - lovely memories of a cherished pet:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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