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(Anacreontic Verse) He smiles and he reaches for me I slide my hand into his cold one and he lifts it to his lips beautiful dead lips we are lost in our universe and we drift his sweet kiss like no other I am floating then it is over and he fades away I am weeping it is a dream a breeze touches me it is dark here at his tomb in memory of my beloved engraved in stone something glitters and I move closer a perfect rose wet with tears his dead tears I kiss the petals _____________________ October 26, 2015 Poetry/Lyric/Anacreontic/'Beloved' Copyright Protected, ID 15-721-445-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Anacreontic Verse 1, sponsor, Edward Ebbs Second Place

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/21/2015 4:23:00 AM

Hi BW. Congratulations on your rhythmic, yet intense verse! ;-)

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:47:00 AM

Teddy, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the congratulations, so appreciated ~

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/20/2015 9:04:00 PM

Wow! So touching! Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:48:00 AM

Kim, thanks for the visit, the love and the congrats, so nice ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2015 3:03:00 PM

Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2015 4:46:00 PM

Sara, thanks for visiting and for the congrats, appreciate ~

Eve Roper

Date: 11/20/2015 1:27:00 PM

Beautiful write, Broken Wing, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2015 4:46:00 PM

Eve, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats ~

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/19/2015 7:54:00 PM

Congratulation B.O.for your deserved win. Anisha DBUS

Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2015 4:47:00 PM

Anisha, thank you for the congrats, appreciate ~

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2015 3:35:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 11/20/2015 4:50:00 PM

Jan, thank you for the congrats ~

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/19/2015 9:15:00 AM

Hi BW: A poignant but lovely poem. Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 9:40:00 AM

Ralph, thank you for the nice comment and the congratulations ~

James Inman

Date: 11/19/2015 7:47:00 AM

Don't know how I missed this BW. Intensely emotional, the last few lines are wonderful.

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thank you so much James for the lovely comment, appreciate ~

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/19/2015 6:45:00 AM

Wings, congrats on your verse full of deep love!

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 7:57:00 AM

Balveen thank you for the contrags and the lovely comment ~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/19/2015 4:45:00 AM

Wow such a sweet write Broken.. lovely rose.. congrats on big win!

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 7:58:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the congrats and the lovely comment ~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/19/2015 4:27:00 AM

Broken Wings, wow!!!! heartfelt!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 7:59:00 AM

Olive thanks for the wow, appreciate ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/19/2015 2:19:00 AM

you made me misty-eyed, constance... super congrats!..huggs

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:00:00 AM

nette, thank you so much for the congrats and the nice comment, appreciate ~

Michael Tor

Date: 11/19/2015 12:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your heartfelt write Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Michael for the congrats, appreciate ~

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 8:09:00 PM

Broken, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:01:00 AM

Skat thanks for visiting and the congrats, appreciate ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/18/2015 7:31:00 PM

Congratulations Broken Wings

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:02:00 AM

Nayda, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Lu Loo

Date: 11/18/2015 6:39:00 PM

Congrats Broken Wings!! Have a blessed night.. :) -LU xxx *smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:03:00 AM

Laura thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate ~

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/18/2015 6:17:00 PM

I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2015 8:04:00 AM

Edward, thank you for hosting such a beautiful contest, what a great form and I am truly honored with my placement ~

Mr Gautam

Date: 10/28/2015 11:50:00 PM

Umm....felt like thousand dreams were left unfulfilled. Nice work though.....Quite creative.

Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2015 12:44:00 AM

Gautam, oh you are so right, a thousand, million dreams I will dream of him, thanks for your visit ~

David Meade

Date: 10/27/2015 8:58:00 PM

Your words captures the grief of death -- lonely, painful, an aching of the heart! 7

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2015 8:22:00 AM

David, such a nice comment and thanks for the 7 ~

Jan Allison

Date: 10/26/2015 5:11:00 PM

beautiful but sad broken wings - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2015 5:26:00 PM

its your trademark and you do melancholy so beautifully:-) Hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2015 5:24:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Jan, well you know me, I write sad ~

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/26/2015 4:32:00 PM

A beautiful but sad poem.I have an album of poetry from the early seventies called " This is My Beloved " two lines from that album..Blindfolded I could kiss a thousand mouths and know your lips..I can tell time by your mouth's kisses "..good luck in the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2015 5:25:00 PM

Frederick, oh thanks for sharing that beautiful line and for your visit ~

Lin Lane

Date: 10/26/2015 4:10:00 PM

Tis lovely but sad ~ a rose with his tears...chills. Very well written, BW.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 4:16:00 PM

Dark and sad have filled many pages for me. We have to put into words what our hearts cannot say. They speak only to us.

Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2015 4:13:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Lin, I do tend to write dark and sad ~