Beloved

Beloved, You are more precious than the rarest of jewels to me No ocean could consume my love--it's deeper than the sea A masterful creation; exquisitely divine And never have I sorrowed in the fact that you are mine I so long to enfold you in my comforting embrace My yearning for you reaches; transcending time and space You were my intended from the moment of your birth And I will follow you unto the edges of the earth Surely as my heart's opened and poured out on this page It shall never cease, nor change from age to dawning age Love, Your Father...Jehovah

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 1/1/2010 6:35:00 PM

beautiful and beyond inspirational,written with intense faith and more, with truth in details and words here within, truly a treasure for me,,and congratulations on your win, and thank you for reading and commenting as well your time spent upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/15/2009 1:09:00 AM

So very beautiful and well expressed , Donna.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2009 8:21:00 PM

Such an inspirational letter--a loving reminder that no matter what, we are indeed loved by the one above...congratulations on your win, Donna!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:43:00 PM

This is lovely and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/1/2009 4:38:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Donna! These words have inspired me today. I've been feeling down-another birthday anniversary comes tomorrow and I have a doctor's appt. so I was a little anxious-not anymore, thanks to your excellent write! Peace and love, Audrey

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2009 9:54:00 PM

Donna, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/30/2009 6:40:00 PM

AMEN.I posted the words to a song called the climb.check it out i'ts a good one.

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/29/2009 12:34:00 PM

This is a good one.For a spirit lifter check out my poem Today is the Day.

Duyanni Noa

Date: 11/28/2009 10:04:00 PM

I love this sonnet that you turned into a letter!..are you a Jehova's witness?

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/28/2009 6:17:00 PM

congrats on HM in contest!!

Date: 11/28/2009 4:22:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations Donna, on your honorable mention in Brian’s “My Dear” writing contest with this heavenly letter. It's easy to see why you won. Your creativity enlivens the mind. Smiles, DAS-J

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 8:08:00 AM

Congrats, Donna, on your winning poem in Brian's contest... beautiful and well deserved win... u are a beautiful poet in words and spirit.. can u help me with something? I have been trying to cut and paste a poem I just wrote from Word to the Post A Poem area and my buttons won't highlight to allow me to do this.. poem is rather long .. is that a factor? appreciate anything u can help me with .. I remember u answering on my blog about this issue so I am turning to u now.. blessing s... luv...

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 11/22/2009 8:28:00 PM

Wow this hit me on a level I wasn't expecting Donna. It's really quite amazing and you hit the nail right on the head for me, especially the constant everlasting nature of Jehovah's love as written in your last stanza. Thank you so much for this. -Yoni

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/21/2009 6:24:00 AM

A truly inspiring piece of work Donna. Beautifully done...also to answer your question regarding my piece Out Of The Mouth Of Babes, check out the piece again. I've answered your question at the bottom of it. Best Wishes Always, Bill. - Out Of The Mouth Of Babes> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=187947

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 12:12:00 PM

A POWERFUL SPIRITUALLY UPLIFTING MASTERPIECE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, LAINIE

James Fraser

Date: 11/19/2009 3:07:00 PM

Delightful write to your faith Donna, it shines from you, huggles from Scotland >> James

Douglas Ace

Date: 11/19/2009 4:39:00 AM

P.S. Adding to favorites!

Douglas Ace

Date: 11/19/2009 4:38:00 AM

What a way to greet the day reading a love letter such as this. Truly inspiring! You have masterfully shown the Heart of our Father through these beautifully descriptive words. Nice twist as I to thought that you were writing to someone else only to find God writing. Donna, your words and beautiful heart continue to inspire me. Your fan, Lightwalker