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Belonging

The Sun Belongs to the earth and Moon Empowering each with beauty Never missing a day The Sun Casts pastel shades Upon the horizon Revealing the fog's presence In the distant vale The Birds Each sing morn's song A secret melody to each other Mankind entertained As a bystander Belonging Each belongs to the other Dependent A circle that can't be Broken Belonging To neither family separated Unaccepted in family trees Intwined To a family Belonging To earth, heaven, moon, stars, sky and Sun Belonging To God Sponsor: Kim Morrison Contest: Just Write Date written: May 05, 2014

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Date: 6/9/2014 10:13:00 AM
LOVELY WIN...LINDA
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Date: 6/9/2014 12:56:00 AM
Sara, this is a very nice poem. Each element in the entire universe is yearning to be belonged and loved. I will put this as one of my favorites. Congrats on the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:38:00 PM
This is an excellent example of a 'chain' of ideas; well presented...much enjoyed. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 6/7/2014 2:19:00 PM
Great work Sara ! Congrats on merited win ,, indeed a wonderful write !
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:32:00 AM
Well done Sara. One of the best. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:16:00 AM
Wonderful, win..... Skat
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Just Write, sara
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Date: 6/7/2014 6:11:00 AM
Excellent work!
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Date: 5/10/2014 4:46:00 AM
:) i love how this comes.. true.. Each and every creation compliments each other.. :) the cycle of life.. :) the ants, mosquitoes and other somewhat at first not useful things for us humans but in the ecosystem they are necessary.. :) and overall all these are creation of our God.. :), olive eloisa.. :)
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:55:00 PM
Hi Sara, Gosh I hope you know how well of a writer you really are. It's a pleasure to read your poems. This was exquisite Thanks so much for sharing this gorgeous write with us here. Thank you also for stopping by my page and leaving your kindness as always.! Peace, Deborah
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