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Belle of the Ball

my new peach dress so fastidiously pressed in hope that a man will seek to caress Strauss’s Blue Danube calls reverberates through halls streaming from Michelangelo walls coy ladies smile bright eyes beguile captivating men’s attention for a while as gentlemen twirl them I, a lone femme feel humbled, an unwanted gem but wait a princely man approaches with rapid gait pounding of my heart will not abate laughter replaces loneliness this night he leads me to the floor beneath candlelight this welcome twist of fate feels so right liberated, we dance our prelude to romance my heart receives another chance swaying, he inhales my perfume scent of gardenias in full bloom with passion, we are both consumed gaiety undulates in each step we take if this is a dream, I dare not wake such precious bliss I could never remake
*Written November 16, 2014

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Date: 12/16/2014 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Carolyn, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:34:00 PM
Beautifully written poem with wonderful description. Congratulations on your win Carolyn.
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Date: 12/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
Hi Carolyn...back to congratulate you on your lovely win. I will be only too pleased to have that dance, if the offer is still open:) hugs // paul
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:56:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:21:00 AM
A truly wonderful write my friend. Your writes always have that high quality and smooth flow . I had my wife come over to read this one and she thinks its quite beautiful and very creative! Super 7 from me.
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Date: 11/22/2014 9:34:00 PM
I came to read this one yet again! Love how this poem flows.
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Date: 11/20/2014 5:03:00 PM
Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry to be so long in responding back..Life has been a little different lately..Sara..Great contest entry ..Reads like winner..
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:45:00 PM
truly very beautiful pen carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2014 1:49:00 PM
I can picture you in that beautiful ball dress sweet Carolyn..What an amazing poem.Adding it to my fvs-Hugs Charma
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Date: 11/17/2014 3:21:00 PM
You will always be the belle of the ball dear Carolyn! you deserve to be...it's not the outside beauty only that counts. This is a beautiful write! It is so good of both you and Jan to share the same peach dress:) love and hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/18/2014 2:00:00 PM
I would love to share a dance with you, Paul. I feel like I know you so well from co-writing poetry. Inner beauty lasts forever and you are definitely blessed with that, my friend.
Date: 11/17/2014 12:23:00 PM
this is so romantic Carolyn fantastic pen hugs 7
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:49:00 AM
Well penned Carolyn...love the rhyme scheme...best wishes
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:46:00 AM
A grand time...hope it isn't a dream...hugs Tim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/21/2014 3:16:00 PM
Just a combination of wishful thinking and experiences from years past, Tim. Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/17/2014 4:51:00 AM
you twirled your pen to lead the ball Belle of the Ball Carolyn. Hugs! Take care XXXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:50:00 AM
I wouldn't want to wake up either. What a delightful interpretation of the picture! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:23:00 PM
I just loved this southern tale, and I am sure without any doubt you would be the belle of the ball anywhere you went!
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Date: 11/16/2014 10:31:00 PM
Life, I suppose, is full of such wishes for suspended moments. But I can only hold my breath for so long, for I must exhale for breathing in deeply once again. I enjoy your poetry so much.
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Date: 11/16/2014 8:36:00 PM
Great visual in the poem Hope it is a winner. Makes one want to dance the night away Hugs Edith
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Date: 11/16/2014 6:10:00 PM
Yes, this is pure sweet delight, Carolyn! jmg
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:16:00 PM
beautifully descriptive Carolyn ... we have identical peach dresses and titles - immaculate taste i think LOL Hugs jan xx Good luck in the contest:-)
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