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Brusque cold snaps crisp as a pine needle stab evoking shivers in the elevated altitude silence Lordly evergreen points, pierce the ephemeral like aspen gold splashing in the emerald thrall, as the lake now stills to glassy gray from aqua ~ Tahoe broods before the snow to stay stalwart (12/24/2022 For Still-Life Autumn Scene contest)

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Date: 8/3/2023 8:45:00 AM
A moving image of nature's tranquillity on the cusp of snow. Most enjoyable to read. Best wishes. Brian
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/3/2023 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Brian.. glad u enjoyed it :)
Date: 12/29/2022 7:07:00 PM
This is gorgeous. Hope it was a win
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/29/2022 9:23:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/29/2022 8:31:00 AM
Great imagery Susan. Beautiful Tahoe, I can see the stillness of the glass lake, and the captivating greenery. Great piece!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/29/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/28/2022 9:44:00 PM
Vividly beautiful, Susan. Your words took me there. :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/29/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/26/2022 7:09:00 PM
Wow! So much imagery in a concise work. Amazing~ enjoyed very much.
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/26/2022 9:07:00 PM
Thank you… glad you enjoyed it :)

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